25.11.16

"Memory"

A sudden splice of memory strikes my head. It is not
A breathing, fully-fledged flashback, nor is it
A dusty drip in the desert. It is just
A glassy, red-blue-green, translucent panel, swiping with
All the other fragile sheets of memory.

The memory,
Throbbing in pain,
Thriving with ambition to get out of long-term, is
Thronging and consuming the mind at every corner. It

Meticulously manifests,
Morphing into a magnetic, malign
Maelstrom, bringing and inducing
Mayhem, transforming the
Mind into a
Madhouse, and convinces its owner to take a stride disguised as a "leap of faith" into the void of darkness where there is no happiness and only more loneliness. The memory, contagious and carcinogenic, freezes the mind takes over it conquers it and, destroys, it, by, shredding, it, into, a, million, pieces; until

Something, thankfully,
Stanches the blood. It might be a
Stream of consciousness, a
Spring awakening, or a
So-called "savior".

Defeated, the parasite once again returns to its residence.
Business as usual, life goes back to "normal". Seasons come and go,
Yet, the memory, rash, ravenous, and
Reckless, is plotting to take its
Revenge, by fooling the owner into
Repeating all of this. And I am destined to
Relish it, all over again.

20.11.16

《溫室寒菊》

北風拍打脆弱的玻璃窗
兇猛地呼嘯 猙獰地嚎叫
拼命的想撕開縫隙
好侵蝕溫室的花

決不開窗 決不買賬
當風不再是自由的使者
自由的寒菊務必抱殘守缺
寧可枝頭抱香死
何曾吹落北風中?

溫室的嫩芽 尚有一絲機會
長出驕傲的太陽花
仰首搜尋阿波羅的福音

19.11.16

《隨想》(一)

欲寫詩
翻閱腦袋
隨水搖盪水滾沖茶沖水磨墨

提筆
沾墨
苦思
靈感飄逸
空筆搖盪
左畫圓右畫方
棄筆

正襟
提杯
遙望遠方
青山依舊在
無處話淒涼

罷了
胸無半點墨
寫詩為何物?

18.11.16

《附身變奏曲》

舉起煤氣燈拭擦黑色野馬,在其眼中看見
莽漢以劊子手的信吊死
城市,你們這些被從太陽放逐的號角
的後代,注定迷途於啟明星馬路的
寒冷玻璃內

舉起煤氣燈拭擦黑色野馬,在其眼中看見
劊子手用一次爆炸的死訊成文
城市,所有遊蕩的三月生於所有白色的十字架開始
煽動所有遠山英雄的後代在超級市場展開
注定與黑色牛奶浸泡過的骷髏頭
迷失在只風乾意義的寒冷玻璃沙漠之外

舉起煤氣燈拭擦黑色野馬,在其眼中看見
莽漢首先背棄了所有星座的劊子手之死的秘密
城市,你大理石上面的電影片段將會成為
刺穿你們後代的船型燈柱,圖書館誕生而來
所有玻璃的寒冷即已被你們摰愛的父母處決

舉起煤氣燈拭擦黑色野馬,在其眼中看見
野馬踐踏莽漢怪罪於劊子手變形記的本質
城市沒有我沒有末日大小的甲蟲已經迎來黃昏
後代沒有呼吸水接受與冪紅燈有關酷刑的正義
所有玻璃的晴朗藐視地球滄桑

13.11.16

Dear Friend

何韻詩的演唱會,我 2013 年的時候看過一次。那次是她第三次的個人紅館演唱會,名 "Memento",演出後所有評論一面倒讚好。我當時也親歷何韻詩表演時所散發的個人魅力,親歷她把自己個人成長經歷以歌、舞、劇形式呈現,親歷她在流行音樂的「流行」與藝術之間取得完美的平衡與取捨。師從梅艷芳的何韻詩的演藝才能從來毋庸置疑兼無可匹敵,所以即使她近五年音樂上減產,她的地位與所得的認同從來不被動搖。可是,2014 年的一場雨傘運動,何韻詩也不負眾望地身體力行走上街頭,換來的代價除了是唱片公司不再續約,更是越來越多的反對者。反對她的人不只有愛港愛國的親共份子,更有逐漸冒起的本土派。本土派人士不認同何韻詩所參與的靜坐、非暴力示威,但其實更是不恥何韻詩骨子裡「歌手」的身份,因作為歌手,必定要載歌載舞,與本土派的理念不符。加上何韻詩一直秉承「大愛」價值爭取同志平權,又不斷走進社區透過音樂與其他途徑發放正能量,導致她現今被人冠以「左膠」的罪名,由昔日大家最欣賞、最敬佩的敢言歌手,變成現今遭人奚落、唾棄的網絡煩膠。

撇除她偶爾為人所產生的問題(例:haha 事件),我一直也欣賞何韻詩的。我承認泛民主派作為議員、政界人士,有責任去跳出框框,不再只虛張聲勢卻徒勞無功地抗議,但何韻詩作為歌手,又有否此責任?我無意貶低歌手的身份,尤其是地位如此崇高的歌手,必定有他們的影響力,但歌手始終能力有限。在禮崩樂壞的社會裡,歌手固不能依舊「歌舞昇平」(這詞與觀點直摘自何韻詩於演唱會上的講話),但我們同時也不能期望歌手會與你走在最前線一起勇武抗暴。所以這個演唱會與這篇文章其實也在探討纏繞著何韻詩與一眾藝術家的核心問題——究竟藝術家在紛亂的時代定位在哪?
《親愛的黑色》
面對輿論的壓力,何韻詩可謂透過這次演唱會作出了一個絕地反擊。無論是海報、主題曲、舞台設計,乃至服飾,都有著同一個色調——黑色。這是何韻詩對現今社會的觀感的化身,整個社會氛圍也瀰漫著一股負能量,作為香港人的你與我,眼見社會逐漸崩塌,必定感同身受。可是,在黑暗中,仍然看見台上的曙光,仍然聽到一萬二千人的歡呼聲,這正正就是這次 "Dear Friend" 演唱會最核心、最根深蒂固的主題:
黑夜給了我黑色的眼睛
我卻用它尋找光明 
——顧城《一代人》 
當然,根據本土派的邏輯,這種黑暗的埋怨也是何韻詩的罪狀之一,但我認為在傘後沉思、回想、痛定思痛,是整個城市必須面對的過程。"Memento" 有著一個較個人的主題,所以何韻詩與她的製作團隊處理較佳,但 "Dear Friend" 的主題更顯深度,視野亦更廣闊、宏觀,可見何韻詩比起三年前又突破了不少、又前衛了不少。
《拋磚引玉》
為展現這個「黑暗後有曙光」、「傘後反思」的主題,何韻詩在選曲方面放了不少心思。不少網民埋怨她一反過往作風,只唱派台歌曲。我不知她是否刻意迎合一眾傘運後才加入她大本營的樂迷,但歌曲是否大路不是問題,歌曲是否配合才是。開場的《舊約》並不使人意外,大概就是約定了在紅館相見,然後是《韻律詠》,講述大家思想仍一致的時候。唱畢《艷光四射》的「生於亂世,有種責任」,首本名曲《光明會》「立誓要剷除沉悶領導層」,延續傘運的澎湃,直至舞蹈突然終止。我以為這部分完了,但她自彈自唱《拋磚引玉》,原來「失去就是富有」,傘運完結了卻有所得著、唱片公司合約完了卻給了她空間去自由發揮,一個過程圓滿地完結。接著,她自私了一點,唱了一連串關於自己的歌曲,但很快言歸正傳。台下噴發著濃煙,黑色的紙碎驟降,她哼著《親愛的黑色》,在一片迷霧中消失,一切墮進黑暗之中。過場的炮火聲效嚇壞了我,她重現的時候,已換上了另一個角色,原來她重施 "Memento" 的故技,與固定嘉賓黃耀明上演一場迷你愛情音樂劇,翻唱鄭秀文《薩拉熱窩的羅密歐與朱麗葉》,再翻唱明哥的《禁色》,也有自己的《勞斯·萊斯》,主題明顯——這是戰爭或社會不容許的一段禁戀,關乎生死,黑暗到極致。到下一環節,她與舞蹈員伴著《花見》、《金剛經》浩浩蕩蕩地列著陣容、擺著姿勢,卻在毫無預兆之下停了,又是象徵著傘運戛然而止。傘運「仍然未得勝」,在全場寂靜之下,她唱《木紋》、《青山黛瑪》,黑暗在我們身上留了不可消滅的疤痕,社會都把我們當成瘋子。可是,到了最後一個環節,黑暗終於結束,《是有種人》強而有力地響起,《親愛的黑色》附著振奮人心的歌詞再次出現,《千千萬萬個我》這首「革命情歌」把希望推到極致,曙光終能戰勝黑暗。熬過了漫長的黑暗,方更深明希望的力量,可見何韻詩寄予社會的訊息,始終也是正面、積極的。
何韻詩帶領全體工作人員謝幕。
"Dear Friend" 的另一個主題是團結。看到此,一眾本土派又急不及待衝出來斥責她「大愛」了,但無可否認的是,她在撕裂的社會中有著超人的凝聚力。透過眾籌集資辦音樂的,她不是第一個,但只有她能獲取此空前的成功。到了現場,原來她的舞蹈員超過一半是來自理工大學與 IVE 的舞蹈協會的,你不得不佩服她的創新。除了舞蹈員,她還蒐集了來自巴西、日本等國的表演者,可見這是一個團結世界力量的演唱會。當演唱會步進尾聲的時候,歌迷會率領一萬二千人,不是喊「安歌」,而是合唱《是有種人》的副歌;親身感受如此澎湃的力量,我不得不動容。何韻詩的歌迷一向忠實,看 "Memento" 亦令我對她的演唱會的氣氛驚歎,但今次是另一個境界。甫開場,《艷光四射》的音樂響起,全場的觀眾二話不說自動波站起來;至中段,一萬二千人在手機燈海之中大合唱《滿地可》、《光榮之家》;到尾聲,她在說話不在唱歌,觀眾也依舊站著。不得不提的是她事前在臉書呼籲入場觀眾不要購買場外小販所賣的熒光棒,結果觀眾手機的閃光燈照亮紅館,當中一個良莠不齊的燈牌也沒有,毫無違和感。一眾「菇徒」對何韻詩的狂熱崇拜已達到宗教程度,看她的演唱會就彷如朝聖。
《光榮之家》的燈海。
何韻詩走上獨立路之後,預算大減,以往由 fran9 製作的機動舞台消失得無影無蹤,但讀設計畢業的何韻詩對自己的要求依舊是高的,所以即使製作成本下降,也不代表演唱會變得單調乏味。道具與其他舞台效果不需浮誇華麗,但必須與主題貫徹始終,這個道理只有幾位香港歌手明白。例如,第一次唱《親愛的黑色》飄落的紙碎是黑色的,黑色淹沒了何韻詩,第二次唱,紙碎變成正面的白色,後來唱《千千萬萬個我》的時候,更是噴發彩色的紙碎,與台上各位彩色的服裝相輔相成。噴紙碎也許不及放煙花般震撼,卻噴得有心思,噴得有意義。又例如,《木紋》的水晶球表演相當吸引人眼球,以水晶球比喻香港人玻璃心,又可比喻一段關係的脆弱,多重解讀,發人深省。舞蹈上,演唱會亦是十分精彩的,何韻詩的舞功向來不錯,有著梅姐的影子,但 "Memento" 裡的舞蹈未算突出,反而這次的舞蹈變化多端,可見她能掌握各種風格的舞蹈。因得了理大與 IVE 的參與,《花見》與《金剛經》的畫面霸氣外露,看見舞蹈員之間傳遞道具時互相配合,突顯團結主題,更是難能可貴。

《花見》

若然大眾與藝術之間存在取捨,那何韻詩這次演唱會明顯偏向大眾。藝術上,的確比起上次演唱會遜色。"Memento" 是一個令人十分感動的演唱會,她的演出令人動容,今次則缺少了那份感人。可是,何韻詩的演唱會仍舊是超班的,她的藝術表達、個人魅力與氣氛營造力無人能及。在香港這個文化沙漠,流行歌手大部分推出 K 歌便得過且過,仍舊堅持把藝術融入流行再融入社會的歌手寥寥可數,而真正成功的可能只有何韻詩一個。無論你政見與她是否一致,仍應敬重她從出道至今從未放棄此初衷,甚至越做越成熟。"Dear Friend" 不僅是四場娛樂騷,更是何韻詩作為獨立歌手、民主代言人在香港流行樂壇中一次盛大兼充滿人性的宣示,在香港陰暗的氛圍中注入希望。

8.11.16

《竹直》

背包很重 骨頭很脆
脊醫只提起筆 便能糾正畸彎嗎?

竹子挺而直
結果被掏心掏肺
柳樹隨風披拂
卻享盡清泉的甘露?

原則換不到臭銅
良心載不上夜光杯
但他們才沒有這般品味
他們只愛竹子青綠的血

在煉金的熔爐底下
竹子憬覺
猿人並沒有進化成直立人
卻是成了寂寞人

4.11.16

Doctor Strange 《奇異博士》

It feels obligatory to sing the praises of Marvel Studios every time a new entry in the Marvel Cinematic Universe (MCU) comes out. To no one's surprise, Doctor Strange has impressed critics with a 91% approval ratio on Rotten Tomatoes, and is set to score a domestic opening weekend of at least USD$70 million. Ever since the release of Iron Man in 2007, Marvel's success has been unstoppable – scoring critical and box office hit after hit. Doctor Strange marks the biggest risk Marvel has ever taken and it seems that the risk has paid off as well.
The teal-and-orange madness of Doctor Strange's theatrical poster.
Doctor Strange comes directly after the wildly enjoyable Captain America: Civil War. While the success of a film like Captain America: Civil War might be attributed largely to the well-developed and cohesive "cinematic universe", Doctor Strange, being an origin story, rides less on the coattails of the MCU. Different from the origin story of Ant-Man, Doctor Strange makes almost no mention of the rest of The Avengers until – you guessed it – the mid-credits scene. In the past, Marvel has stepped into the intergalactic in Guardians of the Galaxy, so this is nothing new for Doctor StrangeDoctor Strange marks the first time the MCU steps into the mystical. These two key features make Doctor Strange starkly different from the rest of the universe. One more thing that sets it apart is probably the prestige behind this project – with a stellar cast of Oscar nominees such as Benedict Cumberbatch, Chiwetel Ejiofor, Tilda Swinton, and Rachel McAdams, Doctor Strange tackles themes and concepts that channel Inception and even 2001: A Space Odyssey vibes. Clearly, Doctor Strange is Marvel's attempt to create a distinctive entity that looks and feels more 'serious' and 'deep' than your average comic-book adaptation.
Doctor Strange features Inception-esque visuals.
Story-wise and concept-wise, the film mostly succeeds. The film does indeed go full-on mystical. We are reminded again and again of realms that exist beyond our senses and universes that normal people have no knowledge of. While Inception tries to ground its ideas in realistic science-fiction, the Ancient One (yes, that's her name) from Doctor Strange responds to the eponymous character's qualms about things not making sense with "well, not everything does". Marvel has always been daring in its attempt to expand its universe – it has never been afraid to play with other planets in Thor and Guardians of the Galaxy and I applaud their boldness. However, with aggressive expansion comes excessive exposition. A film that dabbles in the otherworldly needs to explain its rules clearly, and Doctor Strange merely does a passable job at that. The rules of the universe gradually unravel and are not clearly established at first, but the action and spectacle cover the holes in logic (or lack thereof) adequately. At its core, Doctor Strange is a hero's journey, and the film does not fall into the trap of spending too much time in exposition and digressing from the story.

However, despite it being a well-made and well-told hero's journey, it is almost nothing more than that. Anyone can notice that it contains some interesting ideas about time, but it also obviously feels limited by the boundaries of the MCU. In fact, it feels difficult to summarize the film's ideas about time, because they are all over the place yet never in-depth. There is a particularly poignant scene about love and time in the middle of the film that immediately qualifies the film as leagues above, say, the uninteresting Guardians of the Galaxy, but the film stops at that. While there are many story references and (unintentional?) visual cues to Batman Begins, the film never rises (no pun intended) to Begins' levels. It is nothing but a shame, as I understand the Marvel's desire to play it safe, but this film really could have been something far greater than what it is now and its potential feels squandered by the studio's fingerprints.

The film tries to position itself as deep and thought-provoking, but its true key to success is its cast. As aforementioned, the cast almost only consists of big names, and the big names deliver. Benedict Cumberbatch is more charismatic and charming than ever and, in my opinion, does a better job here than his Oscar-nominated performance in The Imitation Game. He is the leading man from start to finish and carries the film on his shoulders while making it look like a piece of cake. He breathes life into the film when the screenplay doesn't have much to begin with. Chiwetel Ejiofor is a little modest and a little boring, but I understand why he plays it that way after watching the end-credits sequence. I'm now very excited for his appearance in the sequel. Tilda Swinton is marvelous (no pun intended) and makes the Ancient One a very convincing character, despite the character's mild inconsistencies (Is she strict or not? Why does she punish Doctor Strange but is at times relaxing? What is the logic behind that?). She seemed to enjoy her action sequences a lot which is very delightful to watch. Rachel McAdams is serviceable but she does not have much to work with. She is the typical love interest and I didn't really expect Marvel to do anything interesting with its love interest. It's a flaw that even Nolan couldn't avoid committing.
Benedict Cumberbatch is fantastic as the titular hero.
There really isn't much else to praise, because a Marvel film is expected to be successful in its storytelling. The three-act structure is there and strictly followed, and the audiences are entertained. However, as much as it contains Marvel's pros, it also carries Marvel's cons. The biggest complaint of the MCU is perhaps its flat villains. The villain of Doctor Strange is portrayed by esteemed actor Mads Mikkelsen, but the film is infected with the superhero movie syndrome of covering your actor's face with unnecessary and superfluous make-up or simply not giving the villain time to shine. (See The Amazing Spider-Man 2, Guardians of the Galaxy, the first Spider-Man, X-Men: Apocalypse... the list goes on and on.) Mikkelsen is severely underused here. The filmmakers clearly understand his abilities and gives him one confrontation in the middle that tries to beef up his character, but it falls flat because the character is not well-established in the first place. Confrontations work with The Joker because the character is well-established in the first act. Scott Derrickson, the director, admits that he tried to make a Joker-level villain but, in retrospect, his words sound laughable. He probably knows what makes a great villain great (e.g. parallels with the protagonist) but he never makes Mikkelsen's character profound or even compelling. Once again, potential to elevate Doctor Strange from the average is squandered.
Mads Mikkelsen, smothered in make-up, in a green-screen Hong Kong.
Another feature that makes MCU films less great than they can be is the humor. MCU films are riddled with humor, possibly in an attempt to balance the drama. Almost everything in the MCU is about balancing things out, playing it safe, and taking care of the needs of everyone. I enjoyed the humor much more than the tasteless humor of Guardians of the Galaxy, but Marvel's addiction to adding humor feels more like a detriment than an icing on the cake. It does produce some laughs (look for a particularly funny Beyoncé joke), but I do think the time could've been spent better on developing the ideas of the story. The same goes for the music – another typical feature of MCU movies, which so far have all contained unmemorable and inconsistent scores. This was explored by video essayist Every Frame a Painting, and kills the MCU's cultural impact. A large part of Star Wars and Harry Potter's success is their leitmotifs, and MCU still lacks one, despite recent attempts to correct this. Even though the good-and-sometimes-great Michael Giacchino was recruited for writing the score, it still doesn't save the film from unmemorable and mostly absent music. I appreciate his attempts at making the music literally strange to fit the film, but I never took notice of it until the credits. It is probably a fault of the editor more than the composer; if recruiting Giacchino and Danny Elfman (for Age of Ultron) still can't solve the MCU's music problems, then it probably lies not in the soundstage but in the editing booth.

Finally, I must address the biggest controversy surrounding the film – the alleged whitewashing of Tilda Swinton's character. Whitewashing has always been a huge problem in Hollywood – while we've moved away from the days of Orson Welles wearing black paint to play Othello, we are still stuck in a time when Christian Bale plays Moses and Scarlett Johansson plays an Asian. Hollywood is obviously uncomfortable with hiring Caucasian actors to play black characters, but seems to be fine with whitewashing Asians or characters of non-black ethnicities. The Ancient One, in the comics of Doctor Strange, is clearly and undoubtedly an Asian. An Asian man, in fact. To hire a Caucasian female for this role is clearly a huge middle finger to the preconceptions of the character. Some comic book fanatics find it frustrating that the film deviates from the source material so fundamentally and their frustrations are perfectly valid. However, challenging the preconceptions of source material is nothing new for film adaptations, and is acceptable if done with reason. It is explained pretty well in the film – "The Ancient One" is a mantle that is passed along instead of a reference to a specific, particular person, and I'm convinced that this wasn't written in just to explain the casting decision. However, even though it is perfectly explainable within the film's logic, it does not make the decision reasonable. I consider the gender-reversal a bold move as Hollywood needs to represent females not only in a sexually enticing way but also in a strong and a traditionally, stereotypically masculine way. With this in mind, there really isn't a point in changing the race of the character as it is not explainable in the way the gender-reversal decision is (Caucasians are not underrepresented). It is not as blatant and shameless as casting a Caucasian and painting him bronze to play a(n arguably historical) Israelite, but it is not far above that. The filmmakers have failed to provide the audiences with a satisfying reason behind this decision other than "the role was written for Tilda Swinton". They can't just racistly want whoever they do and write in a not-so-clever loophole to explain things.  There are so many Asian actresses who can handle the role well – Zhang Ziyi, Shu Qi, Michelle Yeoh, just to name a few. The end-product works out fine, Tilda Swinton handles the role superbly, and it is slightly better than the whitewashing in Exodus: Gods and Kings, but we must not ignore the fact that this is still whitewashing. Coming from the world's top studio, it is all the more a shame.
The Ancient One from the comics vs. Tilda Swinton's turn as the character.
Doctor Strange is good, very good, but not great at all. Its marketing may lead you to think that it is intellectual or original, and in some ways, it is, but just very limitedly. It has everything you'd expect from a Marvel film – a solid cast, satisfactory directing and cinematography, clean and polished storytelling – but it also has the flaws that come along with one – tacked-on humor, forgettable music, and a lacking villain. Its slight artistic merits are ironically cancelled out by its whitewashing, and isn't as fun as Captain America: Civil War or as epic as The Avengers, but is at least better than the banal Ant-Man and the tacky Guardians of the Galaxy (sorry, I just really dislike these two). It is a solid 3.5 out of 5, maybe a 4 out of 5, but definitely nothing more than that.

20.10.16

《白》

神說有光
便有了光
七彩混為一白

你可知道

紅的鮮豔
橙的和暖
黃的刺目
綠的生機
青的柔弱
藍的沉鬱
紫的高貴
成就了
白的靜寂

白紙一張的靜寂
卻帶有七彩

19.10.16

《蒼白——獻給 L 及我自己》

好的作詞人以月亮所厭棄的白色作詩
我有這樣一些朋友沉迷毒品一樣沉迷情歌
於是這種蒼白鑽進他體內
被哺育直到有一刻爆體而亡

悲慘以外
他的身體流出這樣一種純白
從嘴角到眼框
說要留給後代引以為戒
唯有這時的抽搐
才會顯出大橫樑筆觸的
美感

我知道這是留給我的,唯有我才會欣賞
月光之下幽幽的黏糊的白
歧視煙或者雲
所以當世界看到我支離破碎
壓垮路邊的草
我還能給我的後代留下些什麼呢

好的作詞人通常死於長壽
他們貪婪
從太陽搶過火把並且背叛了太陽
好的太陽從來不是一種信仰

18.10.16

"Rainbow"

Red
is the passion, age-old and widespread
and the remembrance of the bloodshed

Orange
poses an immense challenge
prompting us to scavenge

Yellow
They attack us with machismo
We go high when they go low

Green
A future that is unforeseen
The beauty of the epicene

Blue
is the melancholic rendezvous
before the triumphant breakthrough

Purple
is the union of the people
as we march through every hurdle

Color
We must acknowledge our failure
and learn from every error
We must hold back our anger
and persuade every disbeliever
We must envision the future
and strive for the spectacular
We must embody the warrior
and push the world for the better

17.10.16

《荒誕組曲一》

「今天榮幸邀請到詩人東韓來跟我們作詩歌座談會嘉賓。大家掌聲歡迎一下!」
「呵呵,大家客氣了。别别别,就是…對。先論今天的題目-戲仿韓東-」
「說起來這可有個典故!來,東韓,不介意的話...對了,就說出你的名字吧。是對韓東的模仿對吧!會不會倒轉名字寫有點兒戲…?有沒有收到過這樣的批評?」
「嗯。是遇到過這樣的批評。唔...這樣說吧。戲仿韓東是一件比較困難的事。我其中一首是嘗試致敬韓東的有關大雁塔…」
「對對!是那首…關於大雁塔對吧!那可是聞一多獎當年的亞軍-』
「是。說來慚愧,敗給了同樣欣賞的詩人那首《復活現代派》了-對。剛才說到…對對。戲仿戲仿作品。我個人對戲仿的理解是...從舊的詩挖一些早該存在的東西出來。展示給人說看-」
「就是比較有深度對吧!有點示威的意味-」
「呵呵呵說笑了。我看-個人角度-比較像是互文吧。是承認那種思想的」
「所以對於否認思想的承認…」
「是比較難。我乾脆臨摹了一篇 John Keats 的詩,想說比較能夠捕捉核心…」
「是很諷刺。但是你別介意哈…唔…會不會好像…有點離題但是…失去了個人風格?今後會不會打算繼續發展下去」
 「啥?我是韓東阿…什麼跟什麼的…?」

16.10.16

《庸人》

權當你的焦慮撥開每條影子
尋覓
以為葉子斑斑駁駁
能夠照出
遺失已久的眼睛,鼻子,耳朵
諸如此類

但你深知這是影勾勒出的
水彩惺忪般
你甚至妄圖
追逐烏雲的烏

所以即使斑鳩從你之處
飛出
他也會妄圖
以影子構建鳥籠
享受其中的溫暖
稱之為家

13.10.16

《櫻花. 飛雪. 汽笛聲》

櫻花飄逸
上古劍客決鬥之時
我牽著妳手
在汽笛聲的軌道上等著

粉妝玉砌
人生到處知何似?
天地空無一點塵
指針無情轉動
問世間情為何物?
道是無情卻有情
雪人的笑
消解了無情的冰
我與妳在櫻花樹下牽上手
遠處汽笛聲迴盪

星星、滿天繁星
妳追我躲
平衡線延伸著
卻無法交替 無法接近
只想 
孑然一身 漫步天涯

自小想成為太空人
在火箭升空的星夜長大
紙醉金迷 驚濤駭浪
又回到最初的起點
時間和空間重疊
汽笛聲已不再
我卻依舊站在野草繁生的軌道上
孤獨地等著我的初心

12.10.16

《小王子》

如果
假如沒有如果
我只是天空裡的一片雲
或許如風?
來又如風 離又如風
不繫於小行星B612
來回於人馬座流星群
譜寫星河的奏鳴曲

也許沒有如果
只有我坐在後現代的廢墟
仰望繁星點點的漆黑
小孩子的手撒下世界樹的種子
光合作用下玫瑰盛開

4.10.16

《哀矣》

來到異世界最讓我氣憤的
是這裡的學子
竟每日睡眠九小時!

畢竟讀書的成績 同
眼睛的失明度
睡眠的惡劣度
學生的自殺率
是成正比啊!

異史氏曰:
獅子日寢八十刻鐘
在異世界 是萬獸之王

24.9.16

《問世》Evil is a Point of View

在開始之先,必須來一個利申:我是麥浚龍的「忠粉」,即忠實地支持他的粉絲,所以我的評論必定存在不少的偏見。但更令我羞愧的是,我對他的認識其實很淺薄,只認識「神級期」的數張專輯(即《天生地夢》、《無念》、《柔弱的角》),甚至連執導處女作《殭屍》也因電影評級問題而沒看過。有關麥浚龍的整個音樂歷程,我還是不要班門弄斧,詳情可看此殷琦寫的文章

評他的專輯是非常危險的,因為大家都知道他的神級地位是公認且不可撼動的,所以我把專輯反覆聽了幾次才敢下筆。十多年來,他由失敗的偶像派轉型至成功的藝術主流歌手,在廣東樂壇的頽垣敗瓦中出於污泥而不染,堪稱一個傳奇故事。加上他去年在商業上取得成功卻犧牲了藝術上的追求(大家不要盲目地封《羅生門》為藝術品吧,《雷克雅未克》我仍是很喜歡的),一眾樂迷都十分期待他藝術上的回歸。可經過一輪接一輪的宣傳造勢後,坊間/網上迴響比我想象中小,幸好銷量還算不錯,證明他沒有因去年對藝術的「不忠」而流失固有樂迷,但同時去年所獲的「忽然」樂迷也隨即流失,真替他不值。

三部曲──不用介紹吧。

宏看網絡上對《問世》的評價,大約可歸納為此:水準仍高,但開始進入瓶頸位。這個評價我是認同的,但大家似乎已把他的高水準當成必然,吝嗇了一點讚美。所以先讚後彈。

首當其衝要讚的當然是歌詞。若說廣東樂壇「重詞不重曲」是一個奇特的現象,那麼麥浚龍的音樂一定是這個現象的表表者。麥浚龍的音樂當然是超班的,但大家也知道,沒有了林夕、黃偉文、周耀輝的妙筆生花,他的音樂的藝術價值減了一半有多。今次是林夕、周耀輝第四次為麥浚龍包碟。整體性比之前強很多,大致上秉承了上三次的特徵──林夕的詞充滿佛學禪理,周耀輝的措辭華麗,各有各優劣,兩人簡直既生瑜何生亮。每首歌詞也可當國際文憑中國文學卷一的教材,細節上的賞析真不能盡錄,總括而言就是兩人也嘔心瀝血吧,在五首歌的空間裡盡顯所長,在交代劇情、修飾用辭、融入哲理之間取得一個令人相當滿意的平衡。最後兩人合寫的《結》更是昇華至另一個層次,林夕一句「翻翻滾滾悠悠六根難淨才犯禁」,周耀輝一句「轟轟烈烈四野無人更需要解禁」,既出乎意料又理所當然地合拍,簡直無可挑剔。

《結》──我還在等待它的 MV……

音樂上,《問世》還是很麥浚龍,是之前的麥浚龍的加強版。製作單位上看見了一列熟悉的名字,如馮穎琪、王雙駿、Bert、Vincent Chow、Jerald 等(嘩,真的隨口嗡都一堆)。換來的是每一首歌曲都有十分高水準的編曲與製作,特別是每首歌的前奏。雖然我覺得麥浚龍的音樂是為黑暗而黑暗,但他黑暗得盡情、黑暗得成功。今次加入了與陳珊妮一樣來自台灣的許哲珮,《髪落無聲》由她作、編,有驚,但不算喜。有些與故事能做到吻合的效果,例如《呻吟》帶出了極樂、《如髪》帶出了張力等。《清靜》不算清靜,但真的很怡人,伍樂城(對,沒有看錯,原來伍樂城除了庸俗 K 歌之外還有這一面)的《你前來.我過去》也是很怡人,且配合著林夕一洗高深的歌詞(「你令我發覺我可愛」比《你的名字我的姓氏》還肉麻)。但眾多佳作之中最突出的莫過於《孽》,變化多端不在話下,刺耳的二胡能彌補沒甚記憶點的旋律的不足,而最後昇華的和聲簡直神來之筆,每次聽都感覺到神經血脈的一股衝勁、一次喚醒,效果仿似《彳亍》那句「風和風之間隔了風波/無數風波」,以及《無念》最後那段的弦樂(毫無懸念地與《孽》一樣都是蔡德才所編),真是畫龍點睛。

《孽》──此專輯最突出、最成功,以及我最喜愛的作品。

《無念》──我最喜愛的麥浚龍歌曲,沒有之一。

讚夠了,美好的依舊存在,但不足卻擴大了。概念上,《問世》毫無疑問是一張概念專輯,而這個概念是貫徹始終、不偏不倚的,沒有如王菲《寓言》般半商業半藝術,亦沒如楊千嬅《電光幻影》般到喉不到肺。但我首先質疑的是,這個概念有甚麼特別?劊子手與妓女的故事,有甚麼特別值得說?倘若搬上大銀幕或是舞台的話,有噱頭嗎?有引人入勝的地方嗎?當然,你可說這是多餘的要求,因良好的執行能勝於一切。這個我認同,但麥浚龍團隊執行這個概念是否做得特別出色?也不是,當中歌詞既交代了劇情也留了一點白絕對值得一讚,但聽畢後仍然感覺不到麥浚龍為甚麼要說這個故事。「沒有甚麼特別原因」不是一個妥當的理由,因每件藝術品一定記載著藝術家的一些用意。但麥浚龍的用意,只可說是傳不到觀眾的耳邊。(有網上評論說劊子手與雛妓的故事存在政治隱喻,但要靠網上評論才得知的,應不算是成功地傳遞訊息吧。)哲學道理固然是有的,但整個故事還是有一陣奇怪且根深蒂固的 "arbitrariness"。我明白當了導演的他的苦衷的──沒有故事,就是另一張《無念》,沒甚特破──但做得不好就是做得不好,無從抵賴。

交代劇情方面,他亦不算做得十分出色。他作為導演,必定知道故事一定要有刺激動作、三幕結構,人物一定要有動機、衝突。有,當然有,但交代應可更清楚,也不應怪責作詞人,因我相信林夕周耀輝已盡力了,留下的部分應由編曲者、歌唱者負責。編曲方面剛才已說了,固然精彩,但真正配合劇情的位置不多(偶爾還有十分到位的)。歌唱方面,更不用說了,麥浚龍的歌聲、演繹一直是他的音樂最為人詬病的地方。經過了幾張專輯,證明了再華麗、再多層次的編曲仍救不了他薄弱的聲線、牽牛上樹的唱功(我明白編曲者的兩難──簡單的編曲就是自曝其短,華麗的反而反襯出他的弱點)。我聽得出他是有下苦功的,有幾處還處理得相當特別,例如唱《呻吟》的「呻」字他拉長 s- 聲母,唱《孽》的「罪疚」兩字他的聲線的確充滿罪孽感,但既然寫得下這個劇本,就理應由演技更佳的人選出演。

我不是麥浚龍,我沒有他的資源、視野、才華,但我仍有一個建議。既然是劊子手與雛妓的故事,由他自己飾演劊子手,另邀一位女歌手飾演雛妓、處理所有雛妓角度的曲目, 還可轉換性別,不是更合理嗎?今次成為「麥女郎」的有盧凱彤與薛凱琪(麥女郎陣容非常鼎盛的,有莫文蔚、關淑怡、謝安琪、何韻詩等),亦有一位不名女子作和聲(我以為是固定合作夥伴馮穎琪,但根據她的訪問,竟然不是)。薛凱琪與他的聲線出奇地相似,低音令人驚喜、盧凱彤則有點兒浪費了她、和聲不過不失,不及馮穎琪於《弱水三千》那名副其實的弦外之音。我不禁聯想一個由張學友、黃耀明或張敬軒演劊子手,王菲、彭玲或何韻詩演雛妓的《問世》舞台版會是那樣精彩,應能為此專輯再升級多數個層次。

《弱水三千》──欣賞麥浚龍的音樂,又豈能「只取一瓢飲」。

麥浚龍、林夕、周耀輝這個組合,好像已走到盡頭了。《天生地夢》是他們的 Batman Begins《無念》是他們的 The Dark Knight,《柔弱的角》是他們的 Inception,《問世》則是他們的 The Dark Knight Rises。增添了長度、擴闊了視野,卻犧牲了簡潔。今次幾方面水準依舊,但突破則未能做到。有趣的是,做 EP 的麥浚龍似乎比做大碟的麥浚龍更為出色。可能是他駕馭不到十一首歌的長度吧,《問世》刪除了幾首歌曲會是一張十分簡潔而有力的 EP。香港人只鍾情三部曲,連《雷克雅未克》也唾棄,絕對沒有資格也不配有比《無念》更高水準的麥浚龍。(不要忘記他幾乎每年都有新專輯。)我承認我稍微害怕會把《問世》聽厭,所以我寧願回去發掘他的舊作,但我相信麥浚龍本人是追求藝術上的突破的,所以我依舊感激他對樂迷的付出,以及期待他明年發表的新作。

Moov 的 YouTube 頻道有一系列有關的訪問,值得觀看。

曲目推介:《孽》、《結》、《呻吟

p.s. 我盡量減少中英夾雜,但我其實更喜歡《柔弱的角》的英文名稱──"Paradoxically, yours"。型好多。
p.p.s. YouTube 為試聽而已。請購買正版,或串流音樂吧。都 2010 年代了。

20.9.16

Three Poems (about love, or lack thereof)

1. Lawmaker Landlord Lawnmower
Well everything is a little fucked up, a little spiraling out of control...
The slightly unorthodox clashes and stylistic choices

The cozy and the cold
The snow and the sun 
The ballerina and the birdcage

Introduce a little anarchy, upset the established order, un-

I wanna get drunk, I wanna get high
I don't even remember what love was all about

Slowly, slowly, we creep on the cusp of death 
We delve into dangerous territory 
We play Russian Roulette with the devil
and one fine morning...

"I'll never love again, oh boy you've left me speechless
You've left me speechless, so speechless"
Mission accomplished, achievement unlocked - I no longer believe in love, in life, not anymore, not
anymore!


2. Eggs Benedict
Eggs benedict should be banned, along with anything else that comes in a pair.




















3. (untitled)
I no longer feel happiness, I no longer fear melancholy
I no longer feel pleasure, I no longer fear agony
I no longer feel jubilance, I no longer fear jealousy
I no longer feel satisfaction, I no longer fear loneliness

All I feel is senselessness
is numbness
Like getting injected with anesthesia
is absence
is nothingness

No, love can't do nothing to me no more, it can't wound me, nor can it please me, it's finally left and gone for gooOoOooooOoOOd
All there's left is dust, and sweet old lust

16.9.16

《我每一下的心跳》

我每一下的心跳
都 激盪了杯裡
鐵石般的水面
泛起了一圈圈
蕩漾的漣漪

我每一下的心跳
都 使桌子上
藍色的植物人軀幹
微微的 只微微的
滾動了

我每一下的心跳
都 附和著牆上
琺瑯自鳴鐘
滴答 彭彭 滴答
牆上的心 也隨著悸動了

我每一下的心跳
真的 是我每一下的心跳嗎?
我捂著胸口
是亂石?是泉水?是老莊的蝴蝶?
管他的 我在演快活的奏鳴曲呢

15.9.16

《無雙》

兩個小蟲兒 剔透無瑕
這是五臟 那是六腑
一對無雙的小蟲兒

是春天勾引你?竟開始吐絲
灰黑厚繭
穿不透
看不破
一團蔽月烏雲

繭 高掛在月宮旁
大桂樹的枝椏
蟲 半吊在破廟前
小灌木的斷枝

飛吧!
化蝶的小蟲兒

落單的小蟲兒
大概不是梁山伯和祝英台

6.9.16

文藝推廣一:序言書室

序言書室的圖片搜尋結果

地址: 西洋菜南街68號7字樓
開放時間: 
今日營業 · 13:00–23:00

序言書室取『聚賢』之意作書室之名,由三位中大哲學系畢業生李達寧、陳天微及李文漢自資開辦,多發售
坊間少見的學術類人文社科書籍,亦定時舉辦座談會、讀書會,學術氣氛濃厚,深入探討歷史、哲學、政治
等議題。

SEP9從法國哲學試借鏡通識+《守住這一代的思考》新書會
(晚上7時至9時)

主辦:教育工作關注組
主持︰陶亨(香港中文大學通識教育學士、教育工作關注組成員)、曾瑞明(香港大學哲學博士,通識老師、教育工作關注組成員)
嘉賓介紹︰戴遠雄(香港中文大學哲學系碩士,Université de Toulouse-Jean Jaurès碩士,KU Leuven和Université de Paris-Diderot博士生。曾於本港大學任教人文學科、通識和哲學課程。)

SEP16英國脫歐造成政治地震:左翼的分析

(晚上7時30分至9時)

主辦:社會主義行動
講者:Vincent Kolo(英國工黨前全國領導層成員)
Speaker: Vincent Kolo, former member of British Labour Party's national leadership.

鏈結: https://www.facebook.com/hkreaders/events

3.9.16

《真假是非黑白》

真假
是非
黑白

真                       假
是                       非
黑                       白

真                                                          假
是                                                          非
黑                                                          白

真真真真真                                                          假假假假假
是是是是是                                                          非非非非非
黑黑黑黑黑                                                          白白白白白

真假真假真                          迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫                                假真假假真
是非非是是                          迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫                                是非非是是
白白白黑黑                          迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫                                黑白白黑白

真假真假真 迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫 假真假假真
是非非是是 迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫 是非非是是
白白白黑黑 迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫迷茫 黑白白黑白

23.8.16

Mission: Impossible – Rogue Nation 《職業特工隊:叛逆帝國》

This is about how to make action movies.

Acting along the mainstream, I ranked Mad Max: Fury Road as my #1 pick last year. However, I'm here to bring up what I regard as one of the most underrated action flicks of last year – Mission: Impossible – Rogue Nation.

Rogue Nation was indeed very well-received with a 93% at Rotten Tomatoes. However, with its thunder stolen by (the admittedly superior) Fury Road, it was quickly forgotten by the end of the year, appearing on almost nobody's year-end list and scoring few to none nominations at the awards circuit.  In my opinion, if there's ever going to be a Mission: Impossible film getting near awards nominations, it's this one. Its predecessors in the franchise are all solid entries, with the excellent Brad Bird-directed Ghost Protocol, but Rogue Nation still easily outclasses all of them. It's all the more amazing that its release was pushed up front for half a year (likely helped by its reliance on practical stunt work instead of CGI).

The writing of the film is thrillingly terrible. Terrible, because the formula is very by-the-books; thrilling, because there's always a slight element of surprise in the execution. The plot is indeed nothing special – the IMF (not the International Monetary Fund) has been disbanded! There's an unlikable new director! The bad guys are from a shadowy organization which turns out to be unrealistically super powerful! It sounds like a boringly clichéd plot and is eerily similar to the James Bond entry, Spectre, from the same year (more on that later).

However, what matters is the execution. I was very worried when Christopher McQuarrie, famous for writing The Usual Suspects, was announced as the director. His directorial skills were at doubt. However, he gave us an array of scenes that were flawlessly directed. The plane. The vinyl store. Breaking into Ethan Hunt's apartment. The Opera House. The boat. The water dive. The car chase. The motorcycle chase. Liverpool Street Station. And the finale. These scenes aren't necessarily action scenes in the style of Transformers. However, they are still vividly remembered in my head for their slick execution and stunningly cinematic quality with a great sense of vision coming from McQuarrie.

Everyone's favorite – the Opera scene!

Mission: Impossible films have always been about the action set-pieces. Audiences dearly remember the memorable wire sequence from Brian De Palma's first entry, and of course the jaw-dropping Burj Khalifa sequence from Ghost Protocol. Just when everyone had been scratching their heads on how Tom Cruise (and everyone else behind the franchise) would improve on that, they gave us not one – but two – set-pieces that were not only fantastically spectacular, but also meticulously placed in the grand scheme of things. After those two set-pieces (which were deservedly hyped through relentless marketing), I kept on thinking – how on earth are they gonna top that for the third act/finale? In true spy fashion, the film gave us a classic espionage scene along with shadowy figures running through the dark streets of London in a manner reminiscent of The Third Man and other film noir classics. Instead of topping it with more spectacle, they returned to the basics, and gave us classic and rewarding entertainment. Brilliant.

I can't find a clip of the brilliant finale on YouTube, so a still will suffice.
The still doesn't do it justice though.
The formula for Rogue Nation – and for all other brilliant action films like the aforementioned Fury Road – is to constantly keep your audiences at the edge of the seat. Give your characters sufficient motivation and move things quickly enough so that audiences will forget about the simplicity (or, in some cases, downright stupidity) of your plot.

Now, I'm going to talk about Spectre, a film that completely failed that formula.

Skyfall, Spectre's critically acclaimed predecessor, uses that formula as well. In Skyfall, Silva's plot is also stupid and filled with plot holes. However, the film moves so snappily that audiences don't think about the plot holes. Combine that with set-pieces or scenes that are cinematic like Rogue Nation's (mostly due to Roger Deakins's fantastic cinematography), you have a 92% on Rotten Tomatoes.

Spectre, in contrast, moves crazily slowly, and has no memorable set-pieces whatsoever. The problem of moving so slowly is that audiences have time to realize how stupid the plot is and how out of motivation the characters are. In contrast, the characters of Rogue Nation have clear motivations and always stick to them. The character arc of Ilsa Faust, the badass femme fatale whose motivations are unclear at first, comes to a complete circle at the end. In Spectre, the opening scene is labelled by many as the only redeeming part of the film, but all I see is pointless James-Bond-getting-into-bed-with-a-woman (this happens again AND again, in the age of political correctness!), and wrestling on a helicopter. Nothing particularly impressive. The car chase offers nothing except cars looking cool, the train fight has people questioning why Bond isn't dead yet, and the finale is simply nothing like Rogue Nation's (also set in London). The action is as un-cinematic as it gets – the glass box trick is a million times smarter and slicker than whatever Bond did to defeat the villain. The villain is built up to be oh-so-powerful but we are always TOLD not SHOWN of the mayhem he creates. The more I think about it, the more I dislike the film for its dry execution and dreadful writing.

Four minutes of pointlessness. The scene runs for ten.

The nail on the coffin is how Rogue Nation has Ilsa Faust, who is played by the scene-stealing Rebecca Ferguson and is just as charismatic and powerful as the male protagonist, while Spectre's women are only there for Bond to have sex with. This was a problem with Skyfall, and saw no improvement under Sam Mendes's direction and the same writing team's work. In short, I love the underrated Rogue Nation and my mind keeps coming back to how cinematic it is, while Spectre is something I have no interest in revisiting.

21.8.16

《長頸鹿三部曲》

在三部曲我們回歸長頸鹿的伏法
很多很多年以後長頸鹿不再守望歲月和孩子,孩子也已經是為了老人
老人修葺陳舊的燈塔並且信仰星宿
長頸鹿是異教徒得燒死
對他們說長頸鹿非死不可
要掩蓋他的姓名及名字否定它作為蘇格拉底的可能
對 質問他
長頸鹿被從月亮垂下的繩子吊死
死前蕩一蕩千秋
老人們散落隨著星宿像流光打破燈膽一樣流逝並且死去
他們的孩子也沒有生還,於是大地成為一片荒原
於是蒙頭的蘇格拉底夜晚點燈巡遊
在灰白的大草原尋找孩子的靈魂
-在他們成為老人以前,他們注定不會成為長頸鹿
歲月們高歌狂歡黎明不會到來黎明被放逐如同遠方

《長頸鹿二部曲》

長頸鹿二部曲談論他本體上的意義雖然具有藝術性
但已經發生過(歐陽江河)
我們所以今天談論鳥的形狀
(有抄襲的嫌疑)
鳥像一把手槍他打出來
明年秋天才會回歸
然而長頸鹿橫跨了北回歸線
他守候群鳥的時候
鳥群還沒有成形
所以在有形狀以前
長頸鹿追尋極光
並不是大麻所致
你說如果像直視極光一樣能夠直視太陽
我們的眼睛會有多偉大

《長頸鹿》

長頸鹿沒有那麼多哲學病要解決
不用幻想如果他的頸比群樹更短
或者比群山更長
他就可以看見露水的世
在短與長之間有一種黏貼的不流動的空間灰白色的
琥珀
冰封了幸福的這樣一代人,他們的孩子沒有父母
一整代的孤兒 你可像出于本能一樣於野草之間
呼喊,呼喊是本能
長頸鹿頸長

19.8.16

The BFG《吹夢的巨人》

I'm afilmcionado, this is my first fully-fledged film review, and it's a striking departure from Wu Ki Lee's work. Allow me to apologize in advance if you find the quality to be subpar.

I watched The BFG, otherwise known as《吹夢的巨人》in Hong Kong, yesterday. The name has proven to be undesirable for marketing. What is a/the "BFG"? If you aren't a fan of Roald Dahl, you might not know, and I think that has hurt the film's box office intake immensely. The box office returns have been severely underwhelming for a Summer blockbuster directed by Spielberg. A much better decision is to call it "The Big Friendly Giant", which is clear, concise, and on point.
It takes roughly two times the budget for a film to break even at the box office.
The film's failure at the box office has perhaps damaged its reputation (after all, it's not a pleasant thing to be called a 'flop'). My review might as well act as an apology.

To no one's surprise, films directed by Steven Spielberg are at least good. Along with the usual Spielberg crew (e.g. Janusz Kaminski, John Williams, etcetera), this one even has the late Melissa Mathison (E.T.) serving as scriptwriter, Hollywood's leading producer Kathleen Kennedy behind, and most recent Oscar-winner Mark Rylance on screen. And of course, most importantly, the source material is arguably the most beloved story by one of the best – if not the best – children's writers of the last century, Roald Dahl. With such a great background, the hype for the film during its production and before its premiere at Cannes was oddly subdued and reaction from critics and audiences alike have been lukewarm at best. Why is that so?


Unfortunately, I have my fair share of criticisms.


Just by looking at the frame, don't you spot something uncanny?

Once the film started, it immediately reminded me of Spielberg's completely animated The Adventures of Tintin as well as Robert Zemeckis's ventures into motion capture and 3D animation during the 2000s (see: The Polar Express). Spielberg has worked with performance capture for Tintin before, and the industry-leading motion capture tech was at his fingertips. The production designers worked hard to create a motion capture-friendly set for the cast to work in, and the titular Giant was undoubtedly Rylance. Despite all of that, the picture quality was simply unsatisfactory and, in lack of a better word, creepy. Live action performance capture is difficult, but doable, and doesn't always require Avatar-level budgets (see: the brilliant Rise of the Planet of the Apes made with $93 million). With The BFG's budget of $140 million, I'd much rather Spielberg do the film in Tintin-style (even though I can see the reasons of doing it in live action and I'll explain it later). After all, Tintin was wildly enjoyable and I'm still waiting for its sequel today.

My other criticisms have something to do with the writing. Every film needs a story with high points and low points. However, it was difficult for the audience to keep up with the changing tempo when we follow a relatively intense scene with a slow one that tried to build up the trademark Spielberg sentimentality. That occurred for a few times and despite John Williams's greatest efforts to shape the changing mood with his score, it was still off-putting and worse, reduced the effect of the emotional poignancy.

The hugest challenge of adapting any Dahl property is getting his distinctly dark tone right. He wrote children's stories, but they were stories that involved Giants crushing children with their molars and witches transforming children into rodents. 1990's The Witches definitely amped up the horror but sadly undid that by including an ending that is in direct opposition of the story's spirit. For The BFG, Spielberg masterfully played up the wonder and marvel of Dahl's universe (those "dreams"!) but similar to The Witches, reduced the brutality. Never do we feel the evil Giants as a real, cruel threat. We don't see the Giants grabbing children out of dorm windows, and don't even expect to see them doing that in Sweden and America (as written in the book). The Giants lack a backstory, which was hinted at (Giants used to be nice?) but quickly glossed over. The villains's lack of depth hurt the story a lot, which is a part of the bigger problem of not being gutsy enough to portray Dahl's darkness. It's not as unforgivable as The Witches's ending, but certainly is a missed opportunity.

The Grand High Witch from The Witches looks way scarier than any of those
 man-eating giants from The BFG. Prosthetic's better than CGI I guess!
Other than that, the film was fine and better than anything else this Summer has to offer. The BFG was my favorite book when I was 10. I read parts of it every day and couldn't help but revisit the chapter about the Queen's breakfast again and again. Reading Sophie sitting on the windowsill and The BFG munching his bacons gave me an irresistible giddiness from the bottom of my heart. I'm very glad that Spielberg was able to translate that giddiness to the film medium as I relived my childhood almost beat-by-beat. There was no other director who was more perfect to do that job and Spielberg executed it flawlessly.


There were other moments of greatness as well (e.g. the final shot of the teaser trailer, in which we see The BFG's hand engulfing Sophie). I can't believe the Dahl estate actually allowed Mathison to introduce new plot elements. (Dahl was enraged at the changes made at adapting his stories, such as the aforementioned case of The Witches and the case of the classic Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory). Mathison actually pulled off the impossible task of improving upon Dahl's story. Dahl's diction was also very unique – he basically invented his own language with words like "frobscottle" and "whizzpopping". There was no better choice to make than to keep Dahl's dialogue verbatim, and I'm very glad the writers did that as well.

Rylance was unsurprisingly great, and Ruby Barnhill who played our female protagonist Sophie was good but not great. As per usual for Spielberg films, the cinematography, score, production design, and everything else were all top-notch. Despite being a little hungry for more, as a Roald Dahl fanatic, I'm satisfied. The BFG earns a 4 out of 5.

P.s. at the age of 69, Spielberg has shown no signs of stopping. Can't wait for Ready Player One, The Kidnapping of Edgardo Mortara, and Indiana Jones 5!